Look at the picture above…
In pairs…
Choose one of the women to write the recount from their perspective.
Think about...
What happened before the race started…
What happened during the race…
How people are feeling…
What might happen at the end....
Authors: Tevita and Toma
Start writing here:
First they felt happy and calmly they were starting to be kind to each other when they start to race Smoothly so then after a Man called Israel Folau the very strongly man was coming last so then he was just calmly and find and then he got rid of Richard Kahui the mostly boy that does some big hits . So he ran past Richard Kahui then the Boy that was coming first name George Moala nearly made it but then...
Israel Folau ran as fast as a cheetah up to George Moala. Then he came first. When he came first he done the catholic church sign high and said ‘YEAH. And the others were very sad. george moala said said in a deep voice to Israel folau that came first ‘It is alright least we nearly came atie. Israel Folau that came first said on a big voice to the very handsome man named George Moala ‘Yes nice try.
So they had prize giving and Israel Folau won and then Israel Folau was as brainy as a monkey that he gave George Moala the choufi and he just got the medal like as a choufi so then Israel Folau had a beautiful friendship girlfriend.
The End.
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